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poetry by hafiz
ready steady go if you dont shine kill me if you can this kingdom is mine
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Jerry6Us
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HafizJunaid123
i got the mistake in this poetry
May 28, 2023
fatjew22
whats the mistake
May 28, 2023
HafizJunaid123
the first 2 stanzas are the big mistake
May 28, 2023
brosforever
you should've just taken the 2nd and 4rth stanza
May 30, 2023