WARMERISE
THE DAWN OF WAR
INTRODUCTION
“Hey guys! I am Neo. I make stories and write songs. I have classes, and in the meantime I play Warmerise or make stories. I am playing Warmerise for two years & I am still bad lol. I have seen people posting about Warmerise Story in the forums. Then I thought what if I make a story about it. So I started to make the story and now it’s ready. Hope you would enjoy it!
NOTE: This is just a fan-made version and not the real story...
THANK YOU!
CH. 1 - THE BEGINNING
Far away, there was a universe. This universe was just meant for war. Sometimes it got destroyed by a war, sometimes it got recovered by a war. The universe was swapped and sometimes destroyed. All because of one, It was… Max. Max was an introverted child. He doesn’t come out of his room and doesn’t even eat with his family. He just had one interest, and that interest was Science. He was so drowned in Science like how couples are. He sits in his room and does experiments. His father was a King and her mother was a maid but she came into the royal family because his father loved her. His father, King Ble was the dictator of Blurth and the glorious king of the Blue Empire. He was a strong, intelligent and cold king. He never has mercy on anyone, except his wife. But deep down in his heart, he was worried about Max. He wanted Max to be his heir but his behaviour made Ble’s belief broken. Max had three sisters and four brothers and no one supported him. They were jealous because Max was their father’s favourite child. They always teased and bullied him. Because of this and his love for science, he always stayed at his room and in his own world. And Max also knew about the deepest secrets of the kingdom. He knows about The Swap. The Swap was a black energy which gets created and grows as a century is completed. If someone touches it, it can swap time and positions. It was kept in a big room where no one was allowed to enter. But Max knew to get inside the room. His father always called him to the kingdom but he always rejected because there was a mysterious kid who always stares at him and grins. He is a student who studies at the same school as Max, and he was jealous of him. That kid had a habit of stealing things and was very mischievous. He once stole all the chemicals from the chemistry lab and threw it on a teacher. Max was afraid of him and didn’t wanted to enter the kingdom. The King’s ministers were full of jealousy and envy. That kid was the son of one of the King’s assistants, and his father was the only innocent among the jealous ministers. He always stayed at the kingdom’s quarters because of his father’s job and roamed around the kingdom at night. He has a habit of stealing things and he stole many expensive things from the kingdom. The kingdom found about the robbery but they didn’t know who it was, so they named him “The Friday Robber” as he robbed every Friday.
On the other hand, there was a planet at the same universe called Rubrum. This planet was not in under monarchy but it became under the king, Kokkino. The monarch was actually a small and powerful community, who protested for the demand of a better president as the planet was economically down. But they weren’t taken in consideration, so the community decided to make a decision. The decision was to choose someone as a king from their community and give their best to make him rule the planet. Soon, they made riots all over the planet and made Kokkino the king. Kokkino was not ready to become a king but the fellow members forced him. The planet which was under democracy is now under monarchy. But Kokkino was a warm-hearted human, he had mercy and didn’t gave punishments to law-breakers. Though the planet had a weak ruler, the soldiers weren’t weak. The soldiers were well trained and always won wars. He trained them so well but Kokkino was scared by war. He lost his family on war. But the world was never at peace, the planet was always at the risk of being involved in a war. Kings from different planets come to rule them which leads to a severe wars lasting 2-3 years. Kokkino always win but everything was damaged. The resources were replenished but the people were dead. Kokkino seemed like he doesn’t worry about the world, but it wasn’t his mistake. In his perspective, he just wanted to change the world and the wars didn’t happen because of him but actually because of the Kings from other planets. But after staying in the throne for years, he was in a huge stress and wanted to quit. The world wanted to do the same. Many people wanted to suicide and didn’t want to live as they were really stressed. These were the consequences of a bad ruler.
CH.2 - THE CALAMITY
Things were going like this. War, stress and no peace. But at the same galaxy, there was a planet. This planet had no war but absolute peace. This planet was Mov. This planet had democracy and lived in peace. Though there were crime rates but still people weren’t tortured. This world had ministers but a guy was given the position and responsibility of the world’s saviour. He was just like Kokkino, he also attained protests, made riots, gave speeches. He was considered as the ‘World’s saviour’, as many people believe that if he didn’t live, the world would have been doomed. His name was Aryph. Aryph was a responsible leader. He did his job with full dedication. This planet was just like Earth, modern technology, democratic laws and priniciples. In a way, the planet was also under a ruler but he gave freedom to the people.
At this side, Ble was losing power. He had grown old and weak. His planet was at a huge risk of being attacked and he was worried about it. The king who was never scared or doubted himself is worried now. Max’s mother consoled him and the ministers too. But the jealous ministers urged him to rule Mov as they knew that Ble can get into a big trouble for invading a democratic planet. They forced him to do, Ble was refusing because he can get in trouble but he had no option. He always had a thought in mind, that to not rule a democratic planet. But this idea was broken down to pieces by the ministers. He made his mind to rule Mov. He prepared himself, his assistants and some diligent soldiers and went to Mov. When Max came to know about this, he got really confused. He knew the fact about Ble.
At Mov, the space administration hurried to their workplace and contacted their higher officers. They were really tensed and the arrival was spread over the internet. The media started to write reports about it. The space workers were doing their job in haste and soon, they saw a big spaceship. The spaceship was arriving fast and was near to pass the ozone layer. The space administration suggested to release rockets in order to destroy the spaceship. But it was all in vain, because the ship was enormous. The ship passed the ozone layer and on the way to land. The space workers were now more tensed and were sweating. But, soon Aryph called all the space workers to stop, and he said he is going to look what was going to happen. The spaceship lands on a grassland, the animals run away and some flew. Soon, SWAT enters the place and aims at the spaceship. The spaceship’s door opens, and they see Ble and his soldiers and assistants. The SWAT was confused because they also looked like humans. Soon, Aryph enters the place with his ministers. Ble and Aryph glance at each other. Ble came down from the spaceship.
Ble shouted, “I am Ble, the bravest king ever known. And I, want to rule this world.”
Aryph replied, “Sorry, this planet is democratic and not a free land to rule, so please get out of here as soon as you can!”
Ble was surprised to see his bravery. And they heard many voices coming, it was the media and citizens. The police tried to stop them but they couldn’t. And they rushed to the place. People started to record the incident. Now, Ble asked last time but this time he threatened him. He said if he doesn’t agree this time, he would have to start a war. Aryph still rejected. Ble stared at Aryph. Aryph was now scared, he now thought what can happen to the world due to his rejection. Ble now turned back and returned to his spaceship.
“I would return”, Ble said with a mischievous smile
“NO! wait”, Aryph shouted.
“I will come with you and let’s decide what we will do”
Ble then pointed his hands towards him and the soldiers and assistants came and took him inside the spaceship. But Aryph refused to come, and demanded a spaceship. He then entered the spaceship. People were surprised that their planet even had spaceships. The ministers and citizens were worried. Aryph smiled and waved at them and took off.
Ble was surprised by his bravery and he knew that he wouldn’t give up his world. So Ble had a plan. The plan was to kill Aryph on the midway. But he another thought stroke his mind, that if he killed him then the people wouldn’t listen and would revolt at him which would make him even more easy to approach. Ble was thinking what to do but he had no idea in his mind. The time passed, and the both the spaceships landed at Blurth. Now Ble and Aryph came down from the spaceship and glanced. The soldiers were surprised to see someone from a different planet, Aryph smirked at them. They were surprised by his attitude. Ble demanded a room for him, and advised him to stay there till the decision is taken. The soldiers took him to the palace. Ble also returned to his palace. Max was going out of the palace to meet his friends but he saw Aryph and got in a doubt. He had never seen anyone like that. Ble sees Max and he calls him, Max was scared because his father told him not to go outside when he is not there. Ble was scared that the people who were against him would do something to Max. Ble called Max and asked him that what was he doing there. He lied with hesitation that he was going to buy some fruits. But a father knows about his son, Ble said, “Max, don’t lie to me” and went off. He gasped and went back to the palace.
At Rubrum, Kokkino was in a mind to invade Blurth but he was scared as it was a powerful planet. He thought about it and the ministers also were discussing about it, but Kokkino refused. He didn’t want his planet to get more damaged.
Now, it was the day for the decision. Aryph suggested a court for the decision. The workers prepared the court for him and the judge also came. The judge was a grumpy guy who seemed to support Ble. There were Ble’s people standing but there was no one in Aryph’s side. Aryph and Ble arrive at the court. The judge was craving at a burger but he kept it down. The judge read about the issue and made the lawyers come to tell their points but there was no one at Aryph’s side.
Ble’s lawyer said, “How can a weak and stupid leader refuse a glorious king. He doesn’t know that what pride his nation can get if he is under our monarch.”
As Aryph had no lawyer, he came down by himself and started to argue.
“I don’t care if he is a king or not. No matter if he’s brave or weak. But no king has the right to invade a democratic planet.”
The judge and the King’s people were surprised. The judge was confused and told them to go back to their places and was talking to his assistants about what decision he should take. Suddenly, Aryph shouted and showed some symbol at the window. And then rockets were fired at the court. The whole place got damaged. When Ble opened his eyes, he just saw smoke and fire around him. Ble was asked to escape the place and he ran out and saw the rockets were not only fired on the court but on the whole kingdom. He ran to his kingdom and evacuated everyone. Max saw the rockets and ran out of his room. He went out the place in hurry but remembered about his inventions. He was packing his inventions on his backpack and ran away. His mother was making her children escape and she also ran away. On the planet, several soldiers from Mov came and started to attack the planet. Ble was running to get his weapon and he saw his wife among Mov’s soldiers. He jumped and killed the soldiers with his favourite weapon, The Blaxe. It was a big Axe with special powers like frosting. He took her to a safe place and told her to go away, his wife gets scared and cries looking at him. He also glanced at her with worry. Then, suddenly someone stabs him from the back. He turns back and cuts his head with full fierce and rage. He then proceeds to fight the soldiers. The place was now in a war. The citizens were fleeing while the soldiers were fighting. Ble was killing everyone he saw and he saw Aryph fleeing. He ran towards him and stood before him and lifted his axe but Aryph had a Revolver. Aryph shoots him in the head and Ble dies, he then flees the place as fast as he could. He returns to his spaceship and flies back to his planet.
Everyone were fleeing the palace. Max was running and took everyone with him who were stuck. Max helped everyone but he saw someone going the opposite direction. He went past Max, Max then ran towards him and took his hand and told, “don’t go!”. But he let go off his hand and started to run. Max was confused, he wanted to flee the place but he also didn’t want to leave the guy. He proceeded to follow him, he was calling him but he had no response. He turns and he still follows him. Max then sees no one and realises it is The Swap’s room. He hurries to the room in fear and sees the guy’s face, it was the mysterious kid who grins at him. He shouted at him and said him not to touch that. But the kid didn’t listen to him and jumped to touch The Swap. Max also jumps in order to save him. Unfortunately, the kid touches the swap and Max fell down on his head. He wasn’t able to see anything, he realised there was blood coming from his head. Max could have jumped earlier. He saw everything go white, slowly slowly…
neoknuxx said:This chapter has a zexy @ss XDCH. 1 - THE BEGINNING
Far away, there was a universe. This universe was just meant for war. Sometimes it got destroyed by a war, sometimes it got recovered by a war. The universe was swapped and sometimes destroyed. All because of one, It was… Max. Max was an introverted child. He doesn’t come out of his room and doesn’t even eat with his family. He just had one interest, and that interest was Science. He was so drowned in Science like how couples are. He sits in his room and does experiments. His father was a King and her mother was a maid but she came into the royal family because his father loved her. His father, King Ble was the dictator of Blurth and the glorious king of the Blue Empire. He was a strong, intelligent and cold king. He never has mercy on anyone, except his wife. But deep down in his heart, he was worried about Max. He wanted Max to be his heir but his behaviour made Ble’s belief broken. Max had three sisters and four brothers and no one supported him. They were jealous because Max was their father’s favourite child. They always teased and bullied him. Because of this and his love for science, he always stayed at his room and in his own world. And Max also knew about the deepest secrets of the kingdom. He knows about The Swap. The Swap was a black energy which gets created and grows as a century is completed. If someone touches it, it can swap time and positions. It was kept in a big room where no one was allowed to enter. But Max knew to get inside the room. His father always called him to the kingdom but he always rejected because there was a mysterious kid who always stares at him and grins. He is a student who studies at the same school as Max, and he was jealous of him. That kid had a habit of stealing things and was very mischievous. He once stole all the chemicals from the chemistry lab and threw it on a teacher. Max was afraid of him and didn’t wanted to enter the kingdom. The King’s ministers were full of jealousy and envy. That kid was the son of one of the King’s assistants, and his father was the only innocent among the jealous ministers. He always stayed at the kingdom’s quarters because of his father’s job and roamed around the kingdom at night. He has a habit of stealing things and he stole many expensive things from the kingdom. The kingdom found about the robbery but they didn’t know who it was, so they named him “The Friday Robber” as he robbed every Friday.
On the other hand, there was a planet at the same universe called Rubrum. This planet was not in under monarchy but it became under the king, Kokkino. The monarch was actually a small and powerful community, who protested for the demand of a better president as the planet was economically down. But they weren’t taken in consideration, so the community decided to make a decision. The decision was to choose someone as a king from their community and give their best to make him rule the planet. Soon, they made riots all over the planet and made Kokkino the king. Kokkino was not ready to become a king but the fellow members forced him. The planet which was under democracy is now under monarchy. But Kokkino was a warm-hearted human, he had mercy and didn’t gave punishments to law-breakers. Though the planet had a weak ruler, the soldiers weren’t weak. The soldiers were well trained and always won wars. He trained them so well but Kokkino was scared by war. He lost his family on war. But the world was never at peace, the planet was always at the risk of being involved in a war. Kings from different planets come to rule them which leads to a severe wars lasting 2-3 years. Kokkino always win but everything was damaged. The resources were replenished but the people were dead. Kokkino seemed like he doesn’t worry about the world, but it wasn’t his mistake. In his perspective, he just wanted to change the world and the wars didn’t happen because of him but actually because of the Kings from other planets. But after staying in the throne for years, he was in a huge stress and wanted to quit. The world wanted to do the same. Many people wanted to suicide and didn’t want to live as they were really stressed. These were the consequences of a bad ruler.
CH.3 - A NEW PLACE
Max opens his eyes, he sees that he is lying on a bed, he realises that it was a hospital. Max wakes up, he sees the drips attached to his wrist. He removes them. He thinks about the moment where he and the kid jumped together. The memories flashes in his mind. His head hurted when he thought about them. Soon, he sees nurses, doctors and some random people entering the room. They make him lie on the bed again and attach the drips again. The random people asked him, “Dude, you woke up?” Max, who never saw them, asks “who are you guys? Where am i?” The people sighed and replied that they were his friends. Max now gets more confused, he replies that he’s not their friend. Then one of the friend replies that he was on a coma, he was actually hit by a drunken driver and got severe injuries on his head resulting in a coma. He says didn’t agree with them. They all sigh and make him understand that he was on coma. Max still refuses to accept, he told the fact that he was a king’s son. They all laugh at him, Max gets angry and makes them understand about it. The doctors heard their conversation and said that in coma, people can dream, or have lucid dreams. He doubts that maybe Max had the same issue. The doctor discharged him, but Max was still in a doubt. He refused to come but he was forced by the nurses. His friends took him outside and made him sit on the car. Max asks them to take him his home, he wanted to see his parents. They accept the request and took him to his home. When he saw outside the window, everything looked modern and clean. It was looking like it was democratic. Max started to believe slowly that he was in a coma for 5-6 years. Max’s body looked like an adult too. He asks his friend, what happened to me. And they told him that he was a robotic engineer. He was working late at night and once on the way to home, he got hit by a drunken truck driver. He was in a state where he didn’t believe anything. He was worried about his parents. The thing about The Swap doesn’t come to his mind, he didn’t remember everything. Soon, they reached his home. He got out of the car, and saw a small house in a lone road. The whole place was a dry land. He gets into the house and saw two old aged people welcoming him. He gasps. They, weren’t his parents. They were someone else. He turned around and ran away. The old aged people tried to stop him. He was running fast, his tears were falling, he was running out of breath.
Far away, a guy wakes up. He wasn’t someone ordinary. He was the king, King Kokkino. But, he felt different. It wasn’t the Kokkino we know, it was Aryph. He saw outside window, many people were cheering for him. An AI robot came and asked him to get outside the room. He was confused just like how Max was. He saw himself on somewhere different. He was in his home, it was quite futuristic. He saw many people going crazy for him. He doesn’t understand what is happening. After some time, he realises the moment he was in the spaceship going back to Blurth. He wanted to know what happened after that and why is he on a different place. He is told to attend a meeting. He doesn’t agree to come, but the assistants force him as it was important. He enters the meeting room in doubt and sees many employees sitting in a row. He is asked to sit. He is still trying to recollect things. The manager welcomes and greets him. Then, the discussion starts about the galaxy. It was actually a space organisation who believe in magical things. The meeting was about the The Swap. The employees were discussing about The Swap. They were also discussing about a cult which was known for having the key to meet her. An employee there was having a cigarette in his hand, he seemed to look curious to tell something. Aryph wasn’t interested in the meeting. He was thinking that why is he there. After some time, the topic then lands to the Optus. Optus is believed to be a god, who decides positions and time when The Swap is touched. Many people were explaining their theories. It catches Aryph’s eyes. He hears the theories and stands up. He asks whether he can meet Optus or not. Then one of the employee stands up and shows a cigarette. He concludes that taking a puff of this can make him meet her. But the condition is, you can only meet her if you think you have been swapped. The meeting thought it was a joke. They all laughed at him. Aryph asks the assistants to get the cigar. The employee doesn’t allow to do, the assistants push and hit him. They stole it from him and give it to Aryph. He analyses the cigar. He rushes out of the room. He returns to his home. He goes to an empty hall, the assistants rush beside him. They were worried if it was safe. Aryph asks them to move away. They step back in fear. Aryph asks to light the cigar. They light it using a lighter. He opens his eyes and finds himself on space with rocks. He was floating and saw rocks floating too. He turns back and saw someone doing something on a display. He calls her, it was Optus.
“So, you’re here?”
“Are you the Optus?”
“If you have any doubt on it, you wouldn’t have come here”
“I want to ask you something. Where am i? Why are people cheering me? Why am I feeling so weird.”
“You remember the time when you were in your spaceship? It is because, time, was swapped.”
“What do you mean?”
“You heard the theories at the meeting.”
“How do you know?”
“I can watch everything, Aryph. Because, I swapped your position.”
“What? Why did you do it?”
“The universe needs balance, to maintain it, I can do anything.”
“But why am I in someone other’s place?”
“Well, you are King Kokkino. He was a weak ruler who lived in the same time as you. After the Swap, he was made into a better Kokkino. But, I fixed your position there. So, you are in King Kokkino’s place.”
“What was the reason? Why did you put me in his place?”
“I said I need to maintain balance. Your existence would be a big trouble for the universe.”
“Why me? Are you saying that you will kill me?”
“No, not me. It will be someone, ordinary. Not in a position as you. Soon he will find about your deeds which will make him, kill you”
“Who is that?”
“Someone in the same universe as you were. Someone who is also confused as you are.”
“Who can kill me? I am a king, who has the dare to kill me? No matter who he is, I will finish him off!”
“Don’t underestimate him, Aryph. Even if you are a king or a god. He will find you and he will kill you.”
Aryph opens his eyes faints. The assistants lift him and rush to the hospital…
A lone road. A deserted place. Dry plants are enjoying the loos. Someone who was in a confusion about himself. Running fast, competing the loos with his tears falling. Falls down suddenly, and refuses to wake up. Bangs his head on the road. Shouts crazily. Wonder, Aryph now knows the truth but Max doesn’t. This shows the position of a person who knows the truth and a person who doesn’t know the truth. The person who doesn’t know the truth will long for it which makes damages him. That’s what Max did, he wanted to find the reason. Soon, his friends arrive at the place, and take him to their home. They ask him why was he going mad. They explain him that he was in a coma. Max still doesn’t believe. They try their best to make him understand. After some time, Max accepts the fact that he was in a coma but still had a doubt. He thought if everyone is saying that he was in one, then it would be. Why would his friends lie to him? One of the friends, asks the others to make him ready. They make him ready, and take him to a big building. It was the place where he worked. His friends take him to his office back. It was a robotic science department. He enters the office and saw people welcoming him back to the office. He gets happy. Employees told what he used to do in the laboratory. He was the head of the Robotics Department. He also used to help in making robots and AIs. Max, since from his past universe, knows about science. But not much about robotics. The fellow people explain him what to do. He understands stuff correctly and engages into work. They were actually making a robotic soldier, which was programmed such that it finishes the target completely. They underwent several trials, but some of them still failed. They were working on its flaws. After some time, a guy shows up in front of Max. Max gets scared. He was wearing a shabby pant, his brown hair wasn’t proper and looked messy. He was craving on a hamburger, and looked like a bubbly person. He was quite spiritual, he had a strange locket which was associated with a cult. It was his best friend, Onik. Onik sighs and gasps on realising he doesn’t remember him. Soon, the fellow members tell about him and the relationship he has with him. Max says he still doesn’t remember him. The guy puts his hand on his shoulder and tells him about the experiences they had together. Max feels awkward and gets off his hand. He says “ok, ok…” and flees the place. The duty time ends, and he goes out of the office but doesn’t know where to go. Soon, Onik comes and takes him inside his old and rusty car. Max refuses but he forces him. He takes him to an old apartment where old aged people lived mostly. They were roommates also. He opens the door and makes him sit on a sofa which was broken. He explores the place with a disgusted look. Onik comes out of the kitchen and gives him a smoothie. They both drink the smoothie. He said that they used to drink smoothie together at every night. Max doesn’t start a conversation, he sits awkwardly in the chair.
“You know? We used to drink smoothies every night after work.”
“Oh…”
“You see the moon? It’s looking really beautiful!”
“Yeah.. yeah..”
“I can feel that you’re feeling awkward in this old apartment. But, the window gives the best look ever. Every time you see it, you get amazed by the beauty of it. We also wished to have a girl like that moon. Haha”
Max glances at the moon. As Onik said, it was looking beautiful. Really beautiful. Max gets in awe, and also gets amazed by the simplicity of him. He comes forward, and taps his smoothie with Onik’s smoothie. They both smirk at each other and laugh all the night talking with each other.
The sun rises. Max was in the sofa, and Onik was sleeping on the floor. The alarm goes off, they both wake up and realise that they were late for work. They hurry to the office. They both run to the lab, and engage to their work. The lab didn’t have any stress. It was a fun place to work. Max was working on the power generator of the robot soldier. He was setting the limit of how much volts should it consume to get activated. The robot can explode too so it was put in a big round ball which can resist blasts and explosions. While he was setting the limit, something strikes his mind. The moment, when he touched the Swap. He zones out for some time in realisation. The testers were shouting to turn on the generator in order to make the robot activate. Every single moment flashes his mind. He recollects everything. He hears people calling him. He comes out of his thought and turns on the generator in haste. When he turns on the generator, they hear a loud zap and electricity coming out of the wires. Everyone rush and cover themselves. Onik pushes Max and they both cover themselves. Suddenly, they see an explosion. They close their eyes and cover themselves in reflex. They hear a loud boom. They all open their eyes and see the robot activated. It had blue lights and bowed in front of the scientists. Everyone cheer up on their success. Onik lifts Max but Max was still on the realisation. On their way back home, Max tells him about the realisation. Onik laughs and doesn’t believe on him. Max makes him understand. Onik now gets serious and consults him to meet someone. He changes the direction and takes him to a place. That place was a cult where Onik was a member. The place’s entrance was in a cave, which was blocked by many old cars. Someone who is familiar to the cult knows that from the cars, which door has to open in order to enter the indoors. Onik, was a member of the cult, took Max and opened the right car door. They reach the indoors and see people greeting them. They all had dreadlocks and wore some heavy chains on their neck. Max gives out a scared look. Onik takes him to a secret room which had a purple light and smoke. They see a guy meditating, he was levitating. Onik wakes him up, and informs him about Max. The man wakes up and gives him a cigarette. The cigarette looked purple in colour and very hard. The man summons fire from his hand and lights it up. He asks him to take a puff. Max doesn’t believe it, he found it stupid. Onik tells him to take one. He takes a puff, and loses consciousness. Max opens his eyes and saw that he was in a galaxy. He actually came to Optus.
“Hello, my child.”
“What the… where am i?”
“Your friend took you here, I am Optus. I decide positions when the time is swapped.”
“Wait, do you know about the Swap?”
“How wouldn’t I know about it when it is my own creation?”
“Uh… I got swapped right? No one believes the fact”
“No one knows about it, except you. I thought Ble would be a responsible guardian of the Swap, but he wasn’t”
“Do you know where is he? Do you know where are my parents?”
“Sometimes, positions don’t take place. They can get trapped in the white dimension where people cannot escape until another time the time is swapped. They can leave the place if they are lucky enough.”
“Do you mean my parents are trapped in that dimension?”
“Probably, but I am sure Ble would not come alive again.”
“What? Why?”
“First, he failed to protect the Swap. Second, he was killed.”
“What do you mean by killed? Who killed him?”
“Someone who gets killed cannot spawn again.”
“No, it can’t happen!”
“For now, it is a glorious king. But for the past universe, he was a planet’s saviour and for you, it was the strange guy you saw”
“Do you mean the guy who touched the Swap?”
“Soon you will come to know, Max. But don’t try to do what i am thinking...”
Max wakes his eyes and finds himself sitting on a car. Onik was driving it.
“How was the experience man? Ratings please!”
“Good?...”
thundergamerzxd said: its fine :v
CH.4 - ENMITY
Max comes home, and drowns in thoughts about who could have killed his father. Onik advises him to sleep, but he doesn’t. He continues to think it over and over, again and again. He tries to think the conversation between him and Optus. It was 2 A.M, Onik says Max to sleep, but he still didn’t hear him. Onik says, “strange..” Max jerks, he finds the line, “for you, it was the strange guy you saw”. Max then tries to recall every single moment he found strange. Then, he figures out the moment when he saw Aryph walking past him. Max now gets energetic and tries to find who it is. Max takes out a notebook, and starts to investigate. He again, found out another line. “For now, it is a glorious king.” He writes out every single detail, and surfs through some websites of space departments. It was S.PACE.in, it’s the organisation where Max works. He surfs through planets, he realises that there is no world leader for his planet. He searches for planets under monarchy. He finds a planet, which was Brurum. It was planet Rubrum but after the Swap. He wanted to collect information about Brurum but unfortunately, it had no detail. Max goes through the deepest of the internet to find out about Brurum. He soon finds out a guy named Griin. It was a myth that he was from Brurum and he escaped from there. He was discriminated as his name was Griin which is similar to Green, the whole planet had names related to the colour ‘red’, and the official colour was also red for them. He was discriminated as he was not like them. There were more like him. So, they flew to some other planet. But on the way, Brurum sends spaceships and destroys them. He lost his left arm because of this. Max tries to find his address, but it doesn’t show in the maps. He calls Onik with him, and makes him drive to the location. They reach the place and see a forest. The forest had an underground bunker. They open the door and get inside there. There, they see a fat, grumpy nerd with a burger.
“So, you’re here?”
“How do you know us?”
“I am a hacker, I know everything.”
“I saw that you are from Brurum, is it true?”
“Yes, I am from Brurum. But what’s your problem dumbass?”
“I want to know about Brurum, what kind of place is it?”
“Brurum, is just a good planet for a name, but little do people know, for discrimination, it’s a fame. If you are not them, you will suffer.”
“That’s why you escaped, right?”
“Yup. I didn’t like them. A cruel leader, who wants nothing but power. He didn’t care about us.”
“Can you tell me more about the king?”
“Kokkino, King Kokkino. He is very cruel and a big traitor.”
“Can I get to know more about him?”
He turns back and starts to type something on his computer.
“Here! You see this?”
Max saw a king, who was getting cheered by red-coloured people. The king then puts down his mask. That was Aryph. Max recollects the past events, Aryph walking past him. Max rages and gets mad and starts to damage the computer. He gets angry at his father’s killer. Griin then injects something in his body and then he faints.
“Take him away.” Griin orders.
Aryph wakes up after 4 days. He saw himself on a bed. He gets flashes of him and Optus. He then recalls Optus saying, “Don’t underestimate him, Aryph. Even if you are a king or a god. He will find you and he will kill you.” Aryph thinks what in the world can kill him. He’s a king, what can even touch him? But Aryph gets in fear in that someone ORDINARY would kill him, he thinks that maybe that guy would be dangerous. The assistants comes to him and gives him some medicines. He wakes up from the bed and saw people shouting and crying for him. He’s asked to come down from the palace and wear his iconic mask. The assistant makes him wear his suit and helped to reach a stage. He reaches the stage where he sees the people now enjoying and cheering for him. He gets happy and he is asked to unmask. He puts down his mask in pride and everyone shout and cheer loudly once again. This was recorded by cameras. This is actually the same footage shown by Griin. He now gets confident and thinks that, THAT ordinary man cannot even touch me.
Max wakes up and is in his office. Max now is in anger and fierce. He could kill Kokkino no matter where he is. He then gets an idea in his mind, to sneak into S.P.A.C.E’s undergorunds. He calls Onik and asks him to show the Attack room. The Attack room is a place where attack and defense of planets are done. Onik says it’s dangerous as they can lose their jobs but Max doesn’t listen to him. Onik agrees and fear and shows him the place. That place was prohibited to normal workers. They reached the place but it had a lock. Then Onik contacts a fellow worker who is a part-time hacker. He sends a picture of the lock and the hacker immediately sends him a picture of a fake keycard. The hacker also deletes the data of entry and exit of the underground workers. They go inside and the security asks them to wear a gas mask. The security provides a gas mask and they proceed to the next place. They see many people at a place and definitely they can be caught. A buffed guy comes up and asks them to remove the mask. Max asks the hacker to shut off the lights. And boom! The lights shut and they sneak their way to the Attack Room. There they see a device and they search Brurum in it. Max uses his intelligence to find out the controls and sends a minor attack to the planet. Then they see security running towards the room. Max told the hacker to jam the doors. Then they safely came out of the room by the backdoor and ran back upstairs. Onik and Max give a high five to each other.
At Brurum, Aryph asks his assistants to show him the palace more clearly. The assistants were confused that did he not know it from earlier. They first disagreed as he was sick. But Aryph was adamant and threatened them. They had no choice and had to show him. Aryph wraps a blanket around him and is took to every single corner of the palace. Aryph sees a witch, who stayed in the insides of the palace.
“You seem to look in a doubt”
“How do you know?”
“I am a witch and I know more than what you know. The person you’re looking for is going to meet you in a few hours.”
The assistants say that he is a dumb and stupid lady and took him away. He is then took undergrounds, the place was made of rock and Planet’s deepest secrets and resources were kept there. He gets in awe, and is made to sit at a chair. Soon, they hear blasting sounds from somewhere. They look behind and see many drones attacking the place. Aryph is moved to safety but the assistants got injured, soon many soldiers came and started to attack the drones. The drones were tough but somehow they managed to kill it. Some drones flew back and some were damaged. A soldier comes near the drone and picks it up and saw a blue icon in it.
“It’s that planet.”
“What planet?”
The witch comes stares at Aryph from a distance and winks at him. Aryph understood her message and concludes that it’s his killer.
“Prepare yourselves.” Aryph orders the soldiers.
The assistants looked worried. The soldiers screamed “YES SIR!” The administration then announces to the whole planet that King Kokkino would be engaged in a war. The people were worried but Kokkino promised them that he would come back safely and destroy that planet. Everyone wish him. He then prepares himself by taking guns and tools. He orders the soldiers to take L115A3, Carbine, Blast Gun, M67 and Rail Rifles. He then proceeds to the Armoury Spot and takes up Nanocompressors and wears the Sky Trooper suit. He then orders the soldiers to sit in the jets and flew away. They followed the jets which were flying back to their base.
neoknuxx said:CH.4 - ENMITY
Max comes home, and drowns in thoughts about who could have killed his father. Onik advises him to sleep, but he doesn’t. He continues to think it over and over, again and again. He tries to think the conversation between him and Optus. It was 2 A.M, Onik says Max to sleep, but he still didn’t hear him. Onik says, “strange..” Max jerks, he finds the line, “for you, it was the strange guy you saw”. Max then tries to recall every single moment he found strange. Then, he figures out the moment when he saw Aryph walking past him. Max now gets energetic and tries to find who it is. Max takes out a notebook, and starts to investigate. He again, found out another line. “For now, it is a glorious king.” He writes out every single detail, and surfs through some websites of space departments. It was S.PACE.in, it’s the organisation where Max works. He surfs through planets, he realises that there is no world leader for his planet. He searches for planets under monarchy. He finds a planet, which was Brurum. It was planet Rubrum but after the Swap. He wanted to collect information about Brurum but unfortunately, it had no detail. Max goes through the deepest of the internet to find out about Brurum. He soon finds out a guy named Griin. It was a myth that he was from Brurum and he escaped from there. He was discriminated as his name was Griin which is similar to Green, the whole planet had names related to the colour ‘red’, and the official colour was also red for them. He was discriminated as he was not like them. There were more like him. So, they flew to some other planet. But on the way, Brurum sends spaceships and destroys them. He lost his left arm because of this. Max tries to find his address, but it doesn’t show in the maps. He calls Onik with him, and makes him drive to the location. They reach the place and see a forest. The forest had an underground bunker. They open the door and get inside there. There, they see a fat, grumpy nerd with a burger.
“So, you’re here?”
“How do you know us?”
“I am a hacker, I know everything.”“I saw that you are from Brurum, is it true?”
“Yes, I am from Brurum. But what’s your problem dumbass?”“I want to know about Brurum, what kind of place is it?”
“Brurum, is just a good planet for a name, but little do people know, for discrimination, it’s a fame. If you are not them, you will suffer.”“That’s why you escaped, right?”
“Yup. I didn’t like them. A cruel leader, who wants nothing but power. He didn’t care about us.”
“Can you tell me more about the king?”
“Kokkino, King Kokkino. He is very cruel and a big traitor.”
“Can I get to know more about him?”
He turns back and starts to type something on his computer.
“Here! You see this?”
Max saw a king, who was getting cheered by red-coloured people. The king then puts down his mask. That was Aryph. Max recollects the past events, Aryph walking past him. Max rages and gets mad and starts to damage the computer. He gets angry at his father’s killer. Griin then injects something in his body and then he faints.
“Take him away.” Griin orders.
Aryph wakes up after 4 days. He saw himself on a bed. He gets flashes of him and Optus. He then recalls Optus saying, “Don’t underestimate him, Aryph. Even if you are a king or a god. He will find you and he will kill you.” Aryph thinks what in the world can kill him. He’s a king, what can even touch him? But Aryph gets in fear in that someone ORDINARY would kill him, he thinks that maybe that guy would be dangerous. The assistants comes to him and gives him some medicines. He wakes up from the bed and saw people shouting and crying for him. He’s asked to come down from the palace and wear his iconic mask. The assistant makes him wear his suit and helped to reach a stage. He reaches the stage where he sees the people now enjoying and cheering for him. He gets happy and he is asked to unmask. He puts down his mask in pride and everyone shout and cheer loudly once again. This was recorded by cameras. This is actually the same footage shown by Griin. He now gets confident and thinks that, THAT ordinary man cannot even touch me.
Max wakes up and is in his office. Max now is in anger and fierce. He could kill Kokkino no matter where he is. He then gets an idea in his mind, to sneak into S.P.A.C.E’s undergorunds. He calls Onik and asks him to show the Attack room. The Attack room is a place where attack and defense of planets are done. Onik says it’s dangerous as they can lose their jobs but Max doesn’t listen to him. Onik agrees and fear and shows him the place. That place was prohibited to normal workers. They reached the place but it had a lock. Then Onik contacts a fellow worker who is a part-time hacker. He sends a picture of the lock and the hacker immediately sends him a picture of a fake keycard. The hacker also deletes the data of entry and exit of the underground workers. They go inside and the security asks them to wear a gas mask. The security provides a gas mask and they proceed to the next place. They see many people at a place and definitely they can be caught. A buffed guy comes up and asks them to remove the mask. Max asks the hacker to shut off the lights. And boom! The lights shut and they sneak their way to the Attack Room. There they see a device and they search Brurum in it. Max uses his intelligence to find out the controls and sends a minor attack to the planet. Then they see security running towards the room. Max told the hacker to jam the doors. Then they safely came out of the room by the backdoor and ran back upstairs. Onik and Max give a high five to each other.
At Brurum, Aryph asks his assistants to show him the palace more clearly. The assistants were confused that did he not know it from earlier. They first disagreed as he was sick. But Aryph was adamant and threatened them. They had no choice and had to show him. Aryph wraps a blanket around him and is took to every single corner of the palace. Aryph sees a witch, who stayed in the insides of the palace.
“You seem to look in a doubt”
“How do you know?”
“I am a witch and I know more than what you know. The person you’re looking for is going to meet you in a few hours.”
The assistants say that he is a dumb and stupid lady and took him away. He is then took undergrounds, the place was made of rock and Planet’s deepest secrets and resources were kept there. He gets in awe, and is made to sit at a chair. Soon, they hear blasting sounds from somewhere. They look behind and see many drones attacking the place. Aryph is moved to safety but the assistants got injured, soon many soldiers came and started to attack the drones. The drones were tough but somehow they managed to kill it. Some drones flew back and some were damaged. A soldier comes near the drone and picks it up and saw a blue icon in it.
“It’s that planet.”
“What planet?”The witch comes stares at Aryph from a distance and winks at him. Aryph understood her message and concludes that it’s his killer.
“Prepare yourselves.” Aryph orders the soldiers.
The assistants looked worried. The soldiers screamed “YES SIR!” The administration then announces to the whole planet that King Kokkino would be engaged in a war. The people were worried but Kokkino promised them that he would come back safely and destroy that planet. Everyone wish him. He then prepares himself by taking guns and tools. He orders the soldiers to take L115A3, Carbine, Blast Gun, M67 and Rail Rifles. He then proceeds to the Armoury Spot and takes up Nanocompressors and wears the Sky Trooper suit. He then orders the soldiers to sit in the jets and flew away. They followed the jets which were flying back to their base.
chapter 5 be like??? Never mind it should be end from chapter 10
Sorry guys! i didnt write the story from a long time because typing is a very stressing work for me and im too lazy :P
anyways, enjoy the next part!
THE DAWN OF WAR
Max was working on his office with other people. He has rage and fierce in his mind, he can kill anyone with that. But Max was not focused on the work, he was distracted. He was working on a machine, in a very weird way. The people working with him thought he was drunk. Soon, everyone notice some hot air coming towards them and the buildings were shaking. A device, called Radar starts to beep, a person checks it and finds that hundreds of spaceships, all in red, were coming towards them. They shout and get out of the building. Max stays still and checks the Radar, and tries to get an inside view. The technology at that universe was so advance that you can see what’s inside someone or something without opening. Max sees that it was a guy dressed in a suit with a cape beside him. Max runs and takes a gun from the workplace, it was G36. He calls Onik and gives him the Mini-G, he struggles to lift it but somehow does it.
“WE SHOULD BE RUNNING RIGHT NOW!”
“No, this is the chance.”
“What chance? To die?”
*gazes angrily*
“If you wanted to die, I could have suffocated you though… WHY ARE YOU KILLING ME TOO?”
They see the spaceship coming, but it was nearing them. They tried to run, Max bravely stands still and shoots the spaceship.But the spaceship came and cut the building in half. Half of the building fell down, people were injured, including Max and Onik. Max wakes up and tries to find Onik, he sees him.
“Hey dude! Wake up!”
“Max…. I can’t…”
“What?”
“No Max, it’s the end…”
“No! I can’t and wouldn’t lose you, you’re the only one left for me now!”
*he lifts him*
“You’re okay, alright?”
He doesn’t get an answer, Max shouts
“NOOOO”
“Onik, wake up! Dude, I can’t live without you!”
Max puts the body down and sits at the sidewalk, he sees no one except them both and the whole place covered with broken buildings and dead bodies. Max starts to cry, he remembers that there is no one left for him now. Max, now stands up, gets a gun from a dead soldier, he removes the soldier armour and shield from him and runs towards the spaceship screaming.
Aryph looks that everything is cleared, nothing is left, the world was on dusts. He was at a building. He turns back and sees someone below with a gun and a shield.
“HEY! You took everything from me *******! You will not live anymore!”
Aryph remembers Optus’ words, he orders the soldiers to attack him. Max adjusts his BlastGun and shield. Many soldiers come towards him with Gravity Gun, Max aims towards the soldiers and shoots them at the head, his aim was really good. And he saw some coins dropping on the ground whenever he shot them at the head. He then notices a soldier having a RPG, he runs and hears the rocket coming towards him. He turns back and places the shield and crouches down. The rocket blasts and luckily Max was alive and he kills the soldier with the guns. Aryph gets shocked and calls for more soldier, he orders 100+ spaceships only to attack Max. A spaceship flew towards him, Max stands bravely in rage. Suddenly, he hears a rocket flying past him and sees that it destroyed the spaceship. He turns back and sees some crew of people. They were a clan of veteran shooters.
“Hey! Get out of the way. They’re ours!”
“Dude, he got so many headshots, let’s just join him.”
“Where are the coins?”
“Wait, who are you guys?”
“We’re just some random shooters who are living on these place for years..”
“Uhmm alright… can you guys kill these soldiers while I get to the main guy?”
“Sure bruv, this is a piece of cake…”
The clan starts to shoot at the soldiers, while Max runs towards Aryph. He gets into the building Aryph is. He tries to take the elevator but Aryph shoots him from behind. Luckily, he had an armour. Max turns back with the BlastGun and they both start to fight. Max is on rage and not on a control on himself. Aryph is still cool and fights him with confidence but Max’s fierce makes him a bit exhausted. Their ammo runs out, they crouch and cover themselves. Aryph throws a grenade and fortunately Max covers himself with a shield. Max gets up and tries to find him, Aryph from behind, with a katana, stabs him.
“HAH, some imbecile god said that someone ordinary would kill me… now see who’s dead, AHAHAHA!”
Max faints and falls on the ground. Aryph proceeds towards the elevator with pride. Goes to the top with the elevator.
“Our job is done, everything’s finished HAH! Throw those silly crew of gunners away!”
*A soldier takes out rpg and shoots towards the clan*
They died. They were injured very much. Aryph laughs with pride but soon hears the elevator ting tong, and sees Max still alive. Max with bare hands stands in front of Aryph with his katana and shield. The soldiers gather around him. Max sees everyone, he tries to think a way out of this. Aryph laughs. Soon, Max goes towards the ledge of the building, a soldier was near him and pointing gun at him. Max kicks him and takes the gravity gun and whooshes past the soldiers slashing them. All the soldiers miss the shots, and get killed. Aryph glares Max in shock. He didn’t have any weapon on his hand. Aryph orders the RPG soldier to shoot at him. The rocket goes off, Max thinks of some plan and runs towards Aryph. Aryph screams to stop the rpg guy but the rocket is already off. Max is very near him and he places his shield before Aryph, the rocket approaches towards them and it hits at the shield and BOOM! Aryph dies and Max survives because of the shield. The RPG guy sees that Aryph is dead and he has no rockets left. Max runs towards him and cuts that soldier’s head. Max now sits at the ground. He sees that nothing is left at the place. Everything is in ruins..
neoknuxx said:this is chapter 6 right?Sorry guys! i didnt write the story from a long time because typing is a very stressing work for me and im too lazy :P
anyways, enjoy the next part!
THE DAWN OF WAR
Max was working on his office with other people. He has rage and fierce in his mind, he can kill anyone with that. But Max was not focused on the work, he was distracted. He was working on a machine, in a very weird way. The people working with him thought he was drunk. Soon, everyone notice some hot air coming towards them and the buildings were shaking. A device, called Radar starts to beep, a person checks it and finds that hundreds of spaceships, all in red, were coming towards them. They shout and get out of the building. Max stays still and checks the Radar, and tries to get an inside view. The technology at that universe was so advance that you can see what’s inside someone or something without opening. Max sees that it was a guy dressed in a suit with a cape beside him. Max runs and takes a gun from the workplace, it was G36. He calls Onik and gives him the Mini-G, he struggles to lift it but somehow does it.
“WE SHOULD BE RUNNING RIGHT NOW!”
“No, this is the chance.”
“What chance? To die?”*gazes angrily*
“If you wanted to die, I could have suffocated you though… WHY ARE YOU KILLING ME TOO?”
They see the spaceship coming, but it was nearing them. They tried to run, Max bravely stands still and shoots the spaceship.But the spaceship came and cut the building in half. Half of the building fell down, people were injured, including Max and Onik. Max wakes up and tries to find Onik, he sees him.
“Hey dude! Wake up!”
“Max…. I can’t…”“What?”
“No Max, it’s the end…”
“No! I can’t and wouldn’t lose you, you’re the only one left for me now!”
*he lifts him*
“You’re okay, alright?”
He doesn’t get an answer, Max shouts
“NOOOO”
“Onik, wake up! Dude, I can’t live without you!”
Max puts the body down and sits at the sidewalk, he sees no one except them both and the whole place covered with broken buildings and dead bodies. Max starts to cry, he remembers that there is no one left for him now. Max, now stands up, gets a gun from a dead soldier, he removes the soldier armour and shield from him and runs towards the spaceship screaming.
Aryph looks that everything is cleared, nothing is left, the world was on dusts. He was at a building. He turns back and sees someone below with a gun and a shield.
“HEY! You took everything from me *******! You will not live anymore!”
Aryph remembers Optus’ words, he orders the soldiers to attack him. Max adjusts his BlastGun and shield. Many soldiers come towards him with Gravity Gun, Max aims towards the soldiers and shoots them at the head, his aim was really good. And he saw some coins dropping on the ground whenever he shot them at the head. He then notices a soldier having a RPG, he runs and hears the rocket coming towards him. He turns back and places the shield and crouches down. The rocket blasts and luckily Max was alive and he kills the soldier with the guns. Aryph gets shocked and calls for more soldier, he orders 100+ spaceships only to attack Max. A spaceship flew towards him, Max stands bravely in rage. Suddenly, he hears a rocket flying past him and sees that it destroyed the spaceship. He turns back and sees some crew of people. They were a clan of veteran shooters.
“Hey! Get out of the way. They’re ours!”
“Dude, he got so many headshots, let’s just join him.”
“Where are the coins?”
“Wait, who are you guys?”
“We’re just some random shooters who are living on these place for years..”
“Uhmm alright… can you guys kill these soldiers while I get to the main guy?”
“Sure bruv, this is a piece of cake…”
The clan starts to shoot at the soldiers, while Max runs towards Aryph. He gets into the building Aryph is. He tries to take the elevator but Aryph shoots him from behind. Luckily, he had an armour. Max turns back with the BlastGun and they both start to fight. Max is on rage and not on a control on himself. Aryph is still cool and fights him with confidence but Max’s fierce makes him a bit exhausted. Their ammo runs out, they crouch and cover themselves. Aryph throws a grenade and fortunately Max covers himself with a shield. Max gets up and tries to find him, Aryph from behind, with a katana, stabs him.
“HAH, some imbecile god said that someone ordinary would kill me… now see who’s dead, AHAHAHA!”
Max faints and falls on the ground. Aryph proceeds towards the elevator with pride. Goes to the top with the elevator.
“Our job is done, everything’s finished HAH! Throw those silly crew of gunners away!”
*A soldier takes out rpg and shoots towards the clan*
They died. They were injured very much. Aryph laughs with pride but soon hears the elevator ting tong, and sees Max still alive. Max with bare hands stands in front of Aryph with his katana and shield. The soldiers gather around him. Max sees everyone, he tries to think a way out of this. Aryph laughs. Soon, Max goes towards the ledge of the building, a soldier was near him and pointing gun at him. Max kicks him and takes the gravity gun and whooshes past the soldiers slashing them. All the soldiers miss the shots, and get killed. Aryph glares Max in shock. He didn’t have any weapon on his hand. Aryph orders the RPG soldier to shoot at him. The rocket goes off, Max thinks of some plan and runs towards Aryph. Aryph screams to stop the rpg guy but the rocket is already off. Max is very near him and he places his shield before Aryph, the rocket approaches towards them and it hits at the shield and BOOM! Aryph dies and Max survives because of the shield. The RPG guy sees that Aryph is dead and he has no rockets left. Max runs towards him and cuts that soldier’s head. Max now sits at the ground. He sees that nothing is left at the place. Everything is in ruins..