Uploading results ain't testing any skills of editing, imo.
Anyways, feedback: Rly hard focusing in what's written there, not talking about reading it. I'm not an editor, but I think making it smoother in a way would make it look better. Or making the angle change every drum beat and just make it glow every melodic sould, idk how should it be called. Get what I'm saying?
Looks okay, but honestly, you should aim for something more original.
The "Obnoxious music + rotating/spining/spazzing out text" intros are literally everywhere.
I suggest trying out something new and fresh, instead of following the old formula.
The background is slightly lacking, the "wave" effects look fine, it just looks sort of empty.
Overall, it's pretty decent, but try something new as well.
I'm not that much of an editor - I made one actual video + intro, so I cannot help that much honestly, especially
that I believe that we use different editing software.
Thank you for feedbacks i'm working on another one soon i hope so.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7jI65xAB08
this is 4K
Snyp3rEli7E said:I would remove the first 5 seconds or so. They add a bunch of movement that doesn't need to be there. The only other thing to remember is to avoid using copyrighted music in the intro, YouTube will check for that and will remove your videos automatically. Other than those things, it's a neat intro.Thank you for feedbacks i'm working on another one soon i hope so.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7jI65xAB08
this is 4K
Coldzer00 said:Yay Jparmia245 new intro !
this one is better than the previous one!
GL
What?
I would remove the first 5 seconds or so. They add a bunch of movement that doesn't need to be there. The only other thing to remember is to avoid using copyrighted music in the intro, YouTube will check for that and will remove your videos automatically. Other than those things, it's a neat intro.
Uh thanks i've made a new one if its great.
https://www.youtube.com/edit?o=U&video_id=wyGG8M_AUlU
Give me your feedbacks as always ;)